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Edge of catastrophe
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
on
Wednesday, 26th November 2014 @ 04:01:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I say hey one day as a walked down the aisle,
What is it that need to drink?
And this story I tell might ring a bell
It's more common than one might think
Hey there it is
As a reached for a v8
But when I did that
It was way too late
As the ground came near
My reflection became clear
On the surface with nowhere to hide
On the edge of catastrophe
A one-time everyday calamity
God Bless my friends and family
But honey, this gait don't wanna work
Here I go off to the bank
That thought was followed by a very loud clank
No, not the sound of coins on the counter
It was my carcass that fell and sank
And as I looked up
Ol' Mr. Gluck
Extended and offered a hand
No thanks teach
I appreciate your reach
It's just gonna happen agaaaain.
On the edge of catastrophe
A one-time everyday calamity
God Bless my friends and family
But honey, this gait don't wanna work
Soon after that
I felt trouble
Oh my dear
I saw double
As I leaned to read my text
Come on guys
You won't burst my bubble
Cause you know what happened next
On the edge of catastrophe
A one-time everyday calamity
God Bless my friends and family
But honey, this gait don't wanna work
Copyright ©
Beyfoxman5
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2014-11-26 16:01:48]
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Re: Edge of catastrophe
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 26th November 2014 @ 11:06:30 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem a lot. I am sorry about your struggle with falling, but I liked how you can laugh at yourself and make a positive out of something negative. Great writing. I am clumsy and fall often myself, but I'm just accident-prone.
Heidi
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Re: Edge of catastrophe
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 27th November 2014 @ 07:28:00 AM AEST
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Did you have a stroke? This poem imparts a powerful message. For me, I am going through a hard time right now, but reading your poem put my idea of a 'hard time' into perspective. Thank you.
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