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All Aboard
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Wednesday, 26th November 2014 @ 01:01:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It's precarious,
On the edge.
The edge of all-in, or abandon ship
Lay the cards down and fold, or let 'er rip
I am not equipped.
Life jacket
Preserved for the deserved, that can stack it
I am in the crosshairs of your bracket
No-limit, shipmate
Or, shipwreck.
Is it a royal flush, or hit the deck?
Capsized in your wake; or should I just check.
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hauntedscorp
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2014-11-26 13:01:37]
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Re: All Aboard
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Wednesday, 26th November 2014 @ 03:52:23 PM AEST
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And I am in the crosshairs of your poetry.
Heck, #### your pants, dive in, and swim.
Such a cool, rich read.
Best,
FOX |
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Re: All Aboard
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th November 2014 @ 08:58:39 PM AEST
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I shall quote a wonderful friend of ours:
Take care of you.
I really like these analogies. Another Scorperrific poem!!!
TIMbomb
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Re: All Aboard
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th November 2014 @ 09:20:37 PM AEST
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Came back to read again and realized I forgetted to say I really liked this little bit here:
Preserved for the deserved, that can stack it |
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Re: All Aboard
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 27th November 2014 @ 07:24:31 AM AEST
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"Capsized in your wake"
Good poem. I like the line above and enjoyed the overall content and direction.
Invierno
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Re: All Aboard
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 28th November 2014 @ 11:08:57 PM AEST
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| I cannot express to you the immense joy I felt from reading this. I smiled the whole way through, like an idiot. I always like your poems where each stanza has its own mini theme and the whole poem is based on one main theme. you are a great poet! |
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