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My Son Is Now Me
Contributed by
Invierno
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Tuesday, 25th November 2014 @ 08:54:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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My son is now me
with sadness and joy I note
his strengths and his flaws.
Copyright ©
Invierno
... [
2014-11-25 08:54:17]
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Re: My Son Is Now Me
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Tuesday, 25th November 2014 @ 05:42:06 PM AEST
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Gosh, so many things go through my mind when I read this.
One thought is...
Life has a way of saying "I told you so."
Best,
Fox |
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Re: My Son Is Now Me
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 25th November 2014 @ 09:29:54 PM AEST
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I love this haiku! It says so much in few words, which is what a haiku should. I love the commentary about son morphing to his father.
Heidi |
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Re: My Son Is Now Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th November 2014 @ 07:11:28 PM AEST
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Eye opening view
Through which the father sees son
looking in mirror
Invierno,
this is wonderfully done!
Peace! |
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Re: My Son Is Now Me
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 24th May 2019 @ 02:57:59 AM AEST
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Fruit doesn/'/t fall far from the tree.
Great writing. |
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