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The Tougher The Challenge, The More Special The Person
Contributed by
Beyfoxman5
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Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 03:36:55 PM in AEST
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What I write I find true, but don't want to believe,
Often we are prone to judge simply but what we see
But looking deeper, with true eye exertion
I find, the tougher the challenge, the more special the person
Adversity may build character, but for sure it reveals it
Many throw punches, but who are those 1000 times that get hit?
And after that last blow, fall right on their back
They look up, get up, and get right back on track
It is for these people in deeply I trust
Because it is for you they would stand in front of a bus
Their talent may be great, but their makeup is elite
Always thinking about victory in their most terrible defeat
Knockdowns they shun, for they have them in trillions
Because they are married to a trait called resilience
It is them that treat loss as simply a mistake
As the skin that covers their soul is tougher than a two dollar steak
Path of life can be tough, many circuitous routes
Sometimes walking through fire in a gasoline suit
They know that as life comes and passes
They get great satisfaction out of rising from the ashes
What I write I find true, but don't want to believe,
Often we are prone to judge simply but what we see
But looking deeper, with true eye exertion
I find, the tougher the challenge, the more special the person
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Re: The Tougher The Challenge, The More Special The Person
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 03:46:27 PM AEST
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there is so much truth in this, i believe you are right:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Tougher The Challenge, The More Special The Person
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 10:26:52 PM AEST
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Well expressed piece with a message for everyone. Some great lines in here:
Always thinking about victory in their most terrible defeat.
That fourth stanza is my favourite though; even ending with a funny line. :)
Great job with this poem.
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Re: The Tougher The Challenge, The More Special The Person
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 10:40:58 PM AEST
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| What Nessa and The Scorpendous One said. Nicely done. |
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Re: The Tougher The Challenge, The More Special The Person
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by kmec1990 on
Tuesday, 25th November 2014 @ 09:22:47 AM AEST
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| You are exactly right, thanks for reminding me |
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