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New Perspective
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
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Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 12:36:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Beyond the concrete
Blast off into atmosphere
I see so clearly
Copyright ©
deadreckoning1983
... [
2014-11-24 00:36:42]
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Re: New Perspective
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 01:02:47 AM AEST
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these little haiku gems are more difficult than they look,
thank you for sharing an excellent perfect piece, it is a
really cool concept you have here:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: New Perspective
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 05:41:17 AM AEST
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| Yep, what Nessa said. |
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Re: New Perspective
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 08:46:09 PM AEST
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Sounds good. Perfect.
~Scorp |
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Re: New Perspective
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 10:10:22 PM AEST
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My pen is very small compared to this piece. Man.
Best,
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Re: New Perspective
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by Invierno on
Tuesday, 25th November 2014 @ 08:52:09 AM AEST
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love it. what Nessa said X2
Invierno |
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Re: New Perspective
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 25th November 2014 @ 09:32:13 PM AEST
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I love this commentary on seeing a new view. I can see the view changing as the lines progress in your haiku. I also like haiku writing. You have a talent.
Heidi |
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