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The Day She Did Nothing
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Sunday, 23rd November 2014 @ 10:44:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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A dew drop glistened.
A snail burst the drop of dew.
All she did was watch.
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lesoleilnoire
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2014-11-23 22:44:01]
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Re: The Day She Did Nothing
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 12:39:37 AM AEST
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| I like the feelings of slow contentment in this poem. the quiet and resounding pleasure of just watching are preeminent here. thank you for sharing |
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Re: The Day She Did Nothing
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 03:22:10 AM AEST
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Touching, gentle, beautiful, yet the last line gave me a feeling that there may be some hidden meaning. Me likes!
Thank you. |
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Re: The Day She Did Nothing
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 03:17:12 PM AEST
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i love this, it is so gentle and beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Day She Did Nothing
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 03:41:23 PM AEST
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There is something different here every time I read it.
Best,
Fox |
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