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Abyssum
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
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Sunday, 23rd November 2014 @ 08:23:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Transported from time to time.
I awake on that ethereal strand,
Where it all stands still.
Waiting for a reason to move again.
Memories dammed up in a heap,
Keeps the floodwaters of pain at bay.
She is the raging headwaters that threaten to wash me away.
A continental shelf threatening the abyss,
The black crushing weight of a love unfulfilled.
I shall be washed by the princes of the tombs
And emptiness will bear its mark upon me
Transvectis a tempore usque ad tempus .
Et conturbavit eos qui in litore etheral, .
Ubi totum stat.
Movere inde expectanda est.
Memorias obicem in acervum
Servet aquas Fluminis fortes et dolor ad sinus.
Lavabis me imminentibus, ad capita esse feros .
A shelf continentibus tectis in abyssum ,
In pondere, in amore inane nigrum
Lotus fuero principum monumentis
Et acceperunt caracterem ejus in desolationem erunt me
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Re: Abyssum
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 12:14:56 AM AEST
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really neat that you did it this way, ...it seems so sad, dark
and hollow in the tombs, but i suppose they are all so-
beautiful job, it is all so vivid and the images and feelings
are enchantingly tangible too!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Abyssum
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 03:32:47 AM AEST
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| Huge! It was "the black crushing weight of a love unfulfilled" that gave me that feeling of something huge consuming the writer. Most excellent. |
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Re: Abyssum
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 08:44:55 PM AEST
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This stirs up not only vivid imagery, but some double entendres in meaning. Intriguing how you wrote it emotively full, yet vague enough to be interpreted several ways.
Wonderful.
~Scorp |
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