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Broken
Contributed by
FireStarter
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Saturday, 22nd November 2014 @ 09:36:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Body broken on the floor
Took some pill's
Don't know what for
Crazy screaming, someone's crying
Picture's flying, vase's shattered
I'm dying
Beaten and battered
An unhealthy life tore me down
Pale, breathing uneven, can't see the light
It won't stop till' I'm underground
Unearthly ringing in my ear
When I'm underground
I'll have nothing to fear
I'm walking broken and battered
Condemned to walk the earth
When my life became shattered
Broken...
Copyright ©
FireStarter
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2014-11-22 21:36:10]
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Re: Broken
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 22nd November 2014 @ 10:44:05 PM AEST
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I hope you are just expressing yourself colourfully here. This is a very emotive piece and it's good to get that kind of emotion out. Help is always just a phone call away, don't be afraid to ask for it.
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Re: Broken
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 23rd November 2014 @ 09:41:14 AM AEST
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Dark thoughts of being overwhelmed,
Hope this is just a release of that inner emotional torture. |
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Re: Broken
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by kmec1990 on
Sunday, 23rd November 2014 @ 07:28:44 PM AEST
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Wow what to say, darkly beautiful.
I know they say God never gives you more than you can handle but sometimes it feels like he does.
hope you find peace
Blessings,
K |
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