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Moonlit night
Contributed by
thepoet353897
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Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 02:09:19 PM in AEST
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The cloudy skies on this dark night
Light up wiht dove white light
Penetrating near and far
Just like an albino star
The shadows jump amongst the trees
I'm consumed in my white marquee
A tender breeze to cool to touch
What god created such?
Water shimmers in the glow
A spotlight on the crowing crow
This magical theatre comes to life
Like Macbeth with a silver knife
But alas here comes the bloodshot skies
As the sun begins to rise
Pushing the moonlight far away
All to return, another day...
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2014-11-21 14:09:19]
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Re: Moonlit night
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 08:22:57 PM AEST
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warm welcome to ypdc, excellent first post:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Moonlit night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 10:13:23 PM AEST
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Very very nice. You'd get an awesome from me but I'm a stickler for spelling and typos. I know, I'm bad. :) Very nice with the imagery.
May wish to proof it before you hit submit.
Thank you for sharing and  to YPDC.
Tim
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Re: Moonlit night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 11:46:02 PM AEST
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purrrrr fection cat call
waltzing on the Earth under the moonlit
night all the fairy tale
world at your back
Forward
dreams of beauty
call
Don't go inside
Not tonight
Storied life so bright
as this
Anytime someone
sees this and writes about
it well
I say thank you
Thank you!
Peace!
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Re: Moonlit night
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by sanders on
Sunday, 23rd November 2014 @ 12:18:32 AM AEST
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I like this very much..
Nature is truly beautiful
And what a line..
"Like Macbeth with a silver knife"
Welcome and keep writing...:) |
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Re: Moonlit night
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by spooky on
Sunday, 23rd November 2014 @ 07:05:10 PM AEST
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well written, and enjoyed your words,,
a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: Moonlit night
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by Kimmy79 on
Friday, 27th February 2015 @ 11:41:35 AM AEST
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| Deep rich poetry it flows nicely..good work |
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