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SNOW
Contributed by
kmec1990
on
Thursday, 20th November 2014 @ 09:47:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Like an “F” on your report card
Or a pimple your nose
Getting pregnant when you’re fifty
Sinuses running like a hose
I feel like snow
Ants at your picnic
Rain on the beach
Screaming kids on airplanes
Trash bag bursting at your feet
I feel like snow.
A visit to the dentist
Only bills in the mail
Getting a bad haircut
A dirty lying scale
I feel like snow
A visit from your in-laws,
and dinner with your ex,
dog pee on your carpet,
then getting fired next.
I feel like snow.
If you do not follow,
then let me make it clear;
the day that I’ve been having,
has lasted a whole year.
I feel like snow.
S-tuff
N-o
O-ne
W-ants
This poem is based on an acronym posted on Facebook by Jeremy Hagseth, November 2014
although I have edited out the profanity
Copyright ©
kmec1990
... [
2014-11-20 21:47:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: SNOW
(User Rating: 1 ) by Beyfoxman5 on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 01:32:36 PM AEST (User
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I thought I commented on this poem before. So clever. It shows that if we just free ourselves to live, inspiration is everywhere.
I appreciate all of your comments as well.
THE LONGER I LIVE, THE MORE I APPRECIATE THINGS WITHOUT A PRICE TAG. Such a great perspective.
Many thanks,
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