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Madness Incarnate
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Thursday, 20th November 2014 @ 12:05:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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If the opposite of now were to be never
You'd still be deemed foolish with this barbed endeavour
You are the toilet filled with ****; I'm the lever
Barely a paper cut against a bloodshedder
You're a joke. Someone who has to steal to procure
Taking aim and ejaculating premature
Under microscope, yet you still remain obscure
I'll tie you up with your own verbal ligature
Oops. Excuse my obtuse. I meant literature.
A high school dropout versus an Ivy Leaguer
You seem important; can I get your signature?
Never meant to step on toes or to beleaguer
Hiding in your castle you appear so eager
Stand on the front lines and make me a believer
A flash in the pan; your contribution meager
Just a diploma toting underachiever
A cushy life does not make one a contender
Sitting behind your screen you thought yourself clever
You're a synthetic copy of a pretender
Your words just became my machete to sever.
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hauntedscorp
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2014-11-20 12:05:52]
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Re: Madness Incarnate
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Thursday, 20th November 2014 @ 01:14:13 PM AEST
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| A synthetic copy of a pretender. This poem has some serious life. Yes! |
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Re: Madness Incarnate
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th November 2014 @ 01:19:26 PM AEST
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Just a diploma toting underachiever ...lol, good one!
You're a synthetic copy of a pretender Then I'm real!
Pffft and stuff! ;-) This poem hurt my brain. You're too smart for me but behind every fake beef there's real tofu!
Love it. |
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Re: Madness Incarnate
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 20th November 2014 @ 02:37:58 PM AEST
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colour me weird and fuzzy but i got all excited and warm in
my heart when i saw you wrote a sarcastic poem lol! ahhh...
and you do not disappoint! a brilliant creation full of beautiful
witty bite! would have loved to be a fly on the wall to see the
persons expression! hehe....
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Madness Incarnate
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by Invierno on
Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 07:23:05 AM AEST
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I like this if written with jest in your heart.
Invierno |
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Re: Madness Incarnate
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 11:28:15 PM AEST
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| I do not remember my original comment but I am completely blown away by this. your talents really shined through in this one. loved reading it again too |
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Re: Madness Incarnate
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 22nd November 2014 @ 12:32:06 AM AEST
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Lol you go get em lol
Don't know why I'm laughing
but it's funny to me,
goodd stuff
Thanx for sharing..... |
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Re: Madness Incarnate
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 22nd November 2014 @ 07:52:13 PM AEST
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| I had to read it again. this is so very clever. I am super jelly btw |
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Re: Madness Incarnate
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by Lionel on
Thursday, 27th November 2014 @ 06:10:51 PM AEST
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| You are great. |
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Re: Madness Incarnate
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by Lionel on
Thursday, 27th November 2014 @ 06:13:14 PM AEST
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| You're great. |
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