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Truth
Contributed by
drone
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Thursday, 20th November 2014 @ 11:27:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When it is
centralized
and compartmentalized
when it is chained
behind closed doors
when it is brutalized
and stigmatized
then their illusion
has now become
yours
drone, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems by our other authors for each one you submit.
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drone
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2014-11-20 11:27:58]
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Re: Truth
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th November 2014 @ 11:38:31 AM AEST
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Truth is often in the eyes of the truth sayer.
Now my rant to members such as you. :)
YPDC is a great place. Part of what it makes it a great place is that people come on here and actually read poems and, like me, we also comment on them. We take our time out to post and read and comment. It would be a very sad and boring place if we were like you and just came on here to post poems and then leave. Imagine that. We only knew how to write poems and not how to read them. What would be the point? Post our max a day and, poof, gone. I could post fifty in one day because I am a premium member...pushing everyone's poems down the page...oh, wait, there are no other members...only me. Would be sad.
Do you see my point? What's the point of writing and sharing if no one reads? Apparently you don't.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: Truth
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Thursday, 20th November 2014 @ 01:17:02 PM AEST
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| If you wear the mask long enough, it becomes your face. All great points in this poem |
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Re: Truth
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by kmec1990 on
Thursday, 20th November 2014 @ 07:26:05 PM AEST
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| Well put, beautifully written |
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