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Rival
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Wednesday, 19th November 2014 @ 11:25:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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There's a mirror reflection
She's haggard, you see
Ripened from her dreams unmet,
Victim of regret.
There's a mirror reflection-
Fading out, I fear
Ghostly image still remains
Spirit still enchains
There's a mirror reflection
Looking back at you-
Sneering as you disappear,
Crying insincere
There's a mirror reflection
Staring blank across,
Reflecting eternities-
Sorry for your loss.
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hauntedscorp
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2014-11-19 11:25:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Rival
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 19th November 2014 @ 11:26:52 AM AEST (User
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My dear so intense and nicely written.As always a pleasure to read you. I love how there is a mystery beneath, nice
hugs you
Michellle |
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Re: Rival
(User Rating: 1 ) by sanders on
Wednesday, 19th November 2014 @ 12:34:30 PM AEST (User
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You leave me with no words
The way you spin a yarn of mystery
with your writing
it's always enchanting
Great work Scorp !! |
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Re: Rival
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th November 2014 @ 01:12:39 PM AEST (User
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This has got to be one of the best (if not the best as I recall no others) poems about looking in the mirror and seeing who, or what, is looking back at you! It actually made me feel like crying.
Perfection from the one and only, PerfectoScorp.
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Re: Rival
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 19th November 2014 @ 01:32:47 PM AEST (User
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omg this really got me! ouch even- lol! this is the best
self reflection poem ever! beautiful job!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Rival
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 20th November 2014 @ 11:23:15 PM AEST (User
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I feel this intensely. I feel the reflected me looking back in jest, taunting me for my lack. Some days I have to will myself to look away from the reflections of my failures. It is a hard place to be. We have to examine ourselves to be better, but looking at that pile of waste is hard hard hard. |
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Re: Rival
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 20th November 2014 @ 11:23:57 PM AEST (User
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Another excellent write by the way. now that you are back there will be no room for anyone else to showoff, lol |
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Re: Rival
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 07:26:49 AM AEST (User
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Well done! I like it. Kind of forlorn, but there you have it. Poetry isn't all sweet song and flowers.
Invierno |
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