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~Crow~

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 18th November 2014 @ 11:54:28 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



The sun was out the sky flushed with pink
the air crisp and cold.
Out on a walk that didn't last long
the air stinging fingers and toes.

The Crows and the Seagulls
were hanging around together.
Odd,I thought, stopped to watch and wonder.
Then one landed right next to me.

I talked to it,sure it would fly away,
they do not stay close night or day,
flighty they are those beautiful dark guys
but instead of flying, he hopped,hopped,closer by.

I stood real still, he cocked his head
I talked to him, he listened to what I said.
Then he hopped a bit closer, and began to chatter.

In the crisp morning air,the Crow and I
we had a conversation, back and forth.
For the life of me I have no clue what was said
but it was important, a spiritual thing.
Never before had this happened to me.

He flew off and sat in the tree
chattering still and closely watching me.
I walked back for home, with a smile and a tear
a whispering from the Crow is now what I hear.
Magical it was for me.




Copyright © shelby ... [ 2014-11-18 11:54:28]
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Re: ~Crow~ (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 18th November 2014 @ 12:01:16 PM AEST
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Seriously
That was so kool.
Excellent flow
Thanx for sharing....


Re: ~Crow~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th November 2014 @ 09:50:16 PM AEST
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What did you say to it? I'd be saying sumthin like, "Please don't bring ol' grim reaper!!!!! Puhleeeeeease!!!!!!" :p

That was too cool, Michelle.

Thank you for sharing.

Tim


Re: ~Crow~ (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 19th November 2014 @ 11:38:42 AM AEST
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I love this. It left me with a big smile. These are the magical moments that make life so interesting. It really makes you wonder, our connection to everything and the great unknowns.
You lucky gal! It sounds like you had a visit from someone who thinks you are quite special.



~Scorp


Re: ~Crow~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 19th November 2014 @ 01:59:26 PM AEST
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this is sooo beautiful, i read it yesterday then my internet
went kaput, it just warms my heart, i can see you talking to
him, there is a lot of lure written on crows, i believe this
one means you will meet someone special... blessings,

woofies, big hugs n' love nessa


Re: ~Crow~ (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Sunday, 10th February 2019 @ 06:32:00 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful. Mirrors some of my own experiences.


Re: ~Crow~ (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 2nd September 2020 @ 09:50:46 PM AEST
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I had to read it again....
Ravens and crows are so interesting....




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