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Bars
Contributed by
drone
on
Tuesday, 18th November 2014 @ 09:58:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When I look
through these bars
of you're design
when I feel
the sun
through the window blinds
when I smell
fresh air
when you open the door
I bow my head
and cry
a little more
drone, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.
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Re: Bars
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Tuesday, 18th November 2014 @ 11:38:59 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC. This was short but very beautiful.Thanks for sharing.Make sure to join in and read there is alot of talent and great people at our home here:)
Michelle |
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Re: Bars
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 18th November 2014 @ 12:03:50 PM AEST
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I like this short flow
nice,
good write..... |
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