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Figment
Contributed by
drone
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Monday, 17th November 2014 @ 03:50:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If we say nothing
and pretend
we do not see
will our conscious agree
that we should persuade
our morals
to believe
that it was just a figment
a broken piece
of fear and pain
dragging
her broken battered body
from the shadows
of a filthy ally
into
the crying rain
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drone
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2014-11-17 03:50:02]
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Re: Figment
(User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on
Monday, 17th November 2014 @ 09:02:37 PM AEST
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| There is so much in there about integrity and honesty. You got right at it. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Figment
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 22nd November 2014 @ 03:54:55 PM AEST
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so very sad...the line "dragging
her broken battered body
from the shadows
of a filthy ally
into
the crying rain"
I love this line. There is no redemption...from filthy alley, not into the sun or loving arms, but into rain...another form of misery. Well done on not taking the easy way out.
Invierno
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