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Safe
Contributed by
drone
on
Saturday, 15th November 2014 @ 11:50:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Do we not live
in the ruins
of past pious words
do we not tread
the polluted waters
of today
do we not try
to keep a afloat
while we hide the fear
of drowning out here
looking
for a place
that's safe
Copyright ©
drone
... [
2014-11-15 23:50:56]
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Re: Safe
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by kmec1990 on
Sunday, 16th November 2014 @ 01:55:22 AM AEST
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| so true, well written, thanks for sharing |
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Re: Safe
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by mvvenkataraman on
Sunday, 16th November 2014 @ 04:10:31 AM AEST
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A little, but neat poem
Telling the truth firmly
Words convey sense
To make us muse
A cute, brief write.
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Re: Safe
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Sunday, 16th November 2014 @ 08:37:28 PM AEST
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| It really makes me think about my next write. Thank you. |
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