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I Cried
Contributed by
ginsdance
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Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 07:36:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I starting crying yesterday
As the angel's teardrops fell as rain,
Eroding the filth from everything,
From my soul, to earthly things.
I cried for what I cannot possess,
The horrors and terrors locked in my chest,
I cried for the temptations that I have befallen,
And what the devil is calling
For me to do,
I cried for love yesterday, what about you?
I cried until my soul began to break,
Until the light outside was gone and late,
I cried until the stars appeared
As the hours quickly turned to years.
I cried for what I cannot feel,
For the long, hard road I till,
I cried for what my mind is yearing,
For what my soul is softly turning
Towards, and still I softly cry,
I may cry for my whole life.
I cried yesterday
In that soft, heartbreaking way,
I cried for the horrors that I see,
And for the fear left inside of me.
I cried for friends long dead and gone,
I cried the whole night long,
And as I cried I softly prayed
to let the memories fade
From my mind...
I cried yesterday because I am alive.
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Re: I Cried
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by chatabox on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 03:51:38 AM AEST
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| very sad poem, wipe those eyes and be happy, we are gald you are alive. |
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Re: I Cried
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 06:05:49 AM AEST
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| This si so good Gins... This si by far my favorite of yours. Many times I have cried.... and it's the worst when there is no one there to hold you. Bless you and keep your head up. =) thanx - jason |
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Re: I Cried
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by markymark on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 06:49:28 AM AEST
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| great wtite...we all i, it helps to moisten our eyes to see things clearer...take care..Mark ... |
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Re: I Cried
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by markymark on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 06:51:12 AM AEST
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| sorry that should read "Cry"...my typing is getting worse lol |
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Re: I Cried
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by Chrissie on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 06:56:00 AM AEST
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I'm glad you resubmitted this Gin...it's very moving indeed and one of my favourites of yours.
Chrissie xx |
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Re: I Cried
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by spaceotter on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 02:21:08 PM AEST
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| Who would bring us wonderful poetry like this if you weren't alive? ;) |
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