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The wall must be talking
Contributed by
thezenmonkey
on
Thursday, 13th November 2014 @ 07:21:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Hearing voices through the walls
Bored with the lot
Please either wake me up or put me to sleep
Paranoid i can’t sleep, i cant eat, everything i’ve got i cant even keep
Please either save me or put me out of my misery!
Thought maybe just end it all
Just cut the other side of my wrist
Nothing forever and ever
Peaceful bliss
I aint even got the strength nor courage to do that
I just sit there climbing up the walls of my poxy little flat
Copyright ©
thezenmonkey
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2014-11-13 19:21:12]
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Re: The wall must be talking
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Thursday, 13th November 2014 @ 07:25:29 PM AEST
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| Powell, you didn't need profane language. Powerful message. The world needs you. I'm behind you. |
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Re: The wall must be talking
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 10:59:53 AM AEST
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i'm sorry you are feeling this way, tho i truly love
your poem, every line brilliant, 'tis a beauty this write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The wall must be talking
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 17th November 2014 @ 11:59:51 AM AEST
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I'm sure the uncensored version is lovely too. :)
I get more sadness/loneliness from this piece than anger, but either way you expressed your thoughts well. Keep writing.
I hope that helps you through this difficult time.
~Scorp |
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