|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Little Girl
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Thursday, 13th November 2014 @ 05:50:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
A little girl with broken shoes
Walks to school alone
She must be 5 or 6 they say
And violence must be prone
She walks into class
With a sad little frown
And hopes to god
That no one looks down
The hem of her dress Is torn to shreds
While everyone else Has brand new keds
The sad little girl
Has lost her fight
For she just went through,
her darkest night
Copyright ©
FireStarter
... [
2014-11-13 17:50:52]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Little Girl
(User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on
Thursday, 13th November 2014 @ 06:20:18 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
It's tough to hear of kids living with pain. But at the same time, it draws me to them. A touching write.
Fox |
|
|
Re: Little Girl
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 03:06:12 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
A very sad write. This poem evokes emotion. Nicely done.
 to YPDC.
Tim |
|
|
Re: Little Girl
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 11:08:31 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
heart breaking and heartwrenching write...............
hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
Re: Little Girl
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 16th November 2014 @ 05:25:20 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Very sad and a very sad comment on our society. Where the biggest problems we have is trying to fit in. There are real troubles and most of them are outside of our selves. No one should go without being loved though |
|
|
Re: Little Girl
(User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 20th November 2014 @ 09:28:42 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wow. Chilling . Great job illiciting real feelings in the reader . I wonder what the impetus was for you to write this ? Really good job here. |
|
|
Re: Little Girl
(User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on
Sunday, 8th November 2015 @ 12:55:36 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Good stuff here, Fire.
I like the way it lends to a sequel.
Invierno |
|
|
Re: Little Girl
(User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 28th February 2019 @ 04:34:52 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Sad but very meaningful.
Another great write. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
