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Tracks of Tears
Contributed by
sanders
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Thursday, 13th November 2014 @ 02:47:12 AM in AEST
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There was a time I used to smile
Laugh and play in your cradle all night
Holding your hands in "ring-a-ring-a-roses"
You took me up in your arms to your closest.
There was a time I used to fall
Each and every time I tried to crawl
But you rushed to me to help me in pain
You wouldn't let me get hurt in vain.
There was a time I used to wait
For each and every Sunday brought me anticipation and gay
Standing on that porch I can hear you say
"Come quick and hug me tight as soon as you may".
Then there came a time I used to look
Exactly like you in your younger years would
Everyone said I was growing up to be like you
And even I started dreaming I could actually give up everything for you.
Sitting in your lap I would love to hear
Fairy-tales to drive away my fear
People said these are useless stories
Hilarious talks of a delirious lady
But little did it matter when I had you near
I loved you with all my heart and that was all that was real.
But when the time came to bid you goodbye dear
I forgot to remember that you were no more here
I kept on staring at your dead smiling face
Imagining you were still talking to me then and there.
My soul failed to realise the truth
And I forgot to drop tears too
My Angel had left my side
And I kept on crying forever like a child
Tears lost their way inside my eyes
And forgot to leave their tracks in time.
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2014-11-13 02:47:12]
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Re: Tracks of Tears
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by Chrissylee on
Thursday, 13th November 2014 @ 03:34:55 AM AEST
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This touching heart felt poem reminds me of my own dedicated poem I wrote for my nan when she passed away on 29th of November, 2000.. its on here I actually had it published its called I Guess You Loved Me. Its always so hard to say goodbye to someone you hold so close to your heart and never want to let go of, you've expressed this in your poem very well.... well done keep up the great work.
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Re: Tracks of Tears
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by RussellReinhardt on
Thursday, 13th November 2014 @ 04:43:12 AM AEST
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Hello there
What a beautiful poem. I to had a lady like you nan in my life but she was not my nan she was my mother. Thank you for this poem it brought back good memories. God bless
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: Tracks of Tears
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 10:31:50 AM AEST
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this brings tears to me tho mostly happy ones for i was blessed with a
sweet grandmother too, she is the one who raised me and was always
there no matter what... a truly beautiful moving poem, your pen is gold,
blessings, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Tracks of Tears
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 17th November 2014 @ 11:41:57 AM AEST
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This is so special and heartfelt. My grandparents all passed too soon, but I too carry smiles and wonderful memories.
Thank you for giving me pause in my day.
I am sorry for your loss.
~Scorp |
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Re: Tracks of Tears
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th December 2014 @ 05:32:59 PM AEST
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| I felt like I can feel the love and care which was in every single word and line of this poem. This is so beautiful and so moving. I loved every word and every syllable of this poem. :) |
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