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My Birthday Song
Contributed by
dvtpdw
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Thursday, 6th November 2014 @ 07:02:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
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It's another day spent here on earth
Numbering year Fifty-Nine since my birth
Through it I've had times of trials, tribulations
But more have been spent in joyous jubilations
My hair continues to fade to a snowy white
And more wrinkles are appearing in my sight
As most know my birthdays I prefer to ignore
As each pull me closer to exiting time's door
But today I'd like to sing you my birthday song
And hopefully some will care to dance along
May life give you wondrous loves beyond compare
May time tell you hopeful stories you must share
May your heart brace you against evils' dark stone
May your soul's mirror reveal you're never alone
In each day plans are given for our life's duty
In time's arms we're shown our future's beauty
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2014-11-06 19:02:29]
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Re: My Birthday Song
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by softerware on
Thursday, 6th November 2014 @ 08:42:39 PM AEST
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Happy birthday!This is so hope filled and graceful.
My favorite line is "In time's arms we're shown our future's beauty!"
As you point out, we don't gain dignity and graciousness until we have weathered a few storms, grown a few wrinkles, and begun to turn silver.
Age unfeared is a skill revered.
May you live another whole lifetime..at least!
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Re: My Birthday Song
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 07:19:23 AM AEST
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| Outstanding, I certainly feel what you wrote. You have a way with words. Keep writing. |
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Re: My Birthday Song
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 11:55:43 AM AEST
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i think it's sweet on your birthday you wish such
loveliness for others, ~soooo:: Happy Birthday!! ::
big love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: My Birthday Song
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 09:12:28 PM AEST
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What Nessa said!!!! Very sweet! Great lovely poem. :)
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Re: My Birthday Song
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 09:20:21 PM AEST
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| P.S. We're only two years apart. |
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Re: My Birthday Song
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th November 2014 @ 02:28:57 AM AEST
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question is, will they still love you when you hit sixty four
five and nine
nine and five
either way long time
so make it a pact the latter
to endure
A younger young
A more bewildering age
if there ever there was
to conjure up
I bet you might feel like
you did at five eight
or five seven
or even five three
which is what I was last
time I checked
thinking for the first time
hey man, I wish I was young
like you know, I used to think
I could use as a crux
Like, hey boy, I used to be able to
do all this when I was your age...
But kids don't give a damn about all that
They have no idea
And there you are old getting older
still
Times change, clothes can too
culture changes,
The seventies man, that's when
everything changed
used to be you had to wear things a
certain way.
Rock and Roll happened
Woodstock
Pot.
Nixon,
plastics
Happy B day!!! old man
Peace!
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