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Radio Silence
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Thursday, 6th November 2014 @ 03:04:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I confessed.
You smugly dissed,
My long-awaited kiss
Perhaps,
A letter I've missed?
Why the silence.
I gave you full compliance,
Sparking my defiance
Breathe life.
Make me self reliant
Not to be a tyrant,
Or a brute
But why so hasty
To give me the boot?
I find it rather rude.
Akin to craving food,
Give me something to chew
Who's using who?
Fill my palate with something filling
Quench my thirst with something spilling,
Your break time is up-
Like a volcano; erupt.
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hauntedscorp
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2014-11-06 15:04:43]
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Re: Radio Silence
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 6th November 2014 @ 11:22:01 PM AEST
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I love love love reading your poetry.
I find it rather rude
Akin to craving food,
Give me something to chew
Who's using who?
What a fantastic stanza. I really loved this short poem.
Who would refuse to kiss the lips that hold that mind though? idiot |
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Re: Radio Silence
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 12:03:04 PM AEST
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dare i say you are better off without him, love should never
be pushed away- this person was not worthy of you, i hope
the door hit him in the arse on the way out, too!
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Radio Silence
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 12:24:33 PM AEST
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| Wow. You go! |
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Re: Radio Silence
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by sanders on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 01:48:37 PM AEST
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| This is really so good...I'm sure you'll get your kiss some day... |
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Re: Radio Silence
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st January 2015 @ 10:06:49 PM AEST
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Remember those fishies I spoke of? Well, maybe it's not fishy at all?
You really gots the rhythm thing going on here, especially with the last stanza. Phenomenal !!!
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