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I think I Lost you.. For good
Contributed by
Steb3544
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Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I'm sitting in this little room looking for you. But I cant seem to find you in this crowd of people. Hey are you there? I think I've lost you for good.. I dont know what to do this time. I dont know where to look. I'm scareaming out your name,but I'm not hearing you answer back. Now the room is getting dark and even more crowded. I'm trying to push through the crowd, but its too tight. Where are you? Just yell to me if you are all right. That's all I need to know. Just that one thing. I hear you yelling as I try and push my way through the crowd. It's getting closser. Finally I see you.You're all right. I'm reaching for your hand and I touch you. But eveyone is pushing, so im staring to get farther away from you. I feel my fingers slipping, and your gone, you said nothing. You just let the crowd take you back with them. I'm getting farther and farther away from you, and I know I've lost you for good this time... good bye..
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Re: I think I Lost you.. For good
(User Rating: 1 ) by rickyml85 on
Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 07:39:03 PM AEST (User
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this was an excellent poem. it expressed real emotion. that is what all poems should be made of. keep up the good work steb.
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