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Glade In The Woods Out Of Time
Contributed by
Invierno
on
Friday, 31st October 2014 @ 08:12:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The burble and singing of happy waters
caressing stones honed smooth as the softest light of dawn's breath,
where stillness is so still deafness might have forgot itself
and dappled light invents new delights to play
and frolic as fairy nymphs might on any given day;
With eyes closed and feet knowing, unerring,
I turned and turned and turned round and round,
not caring to move beyond in joy on one spot of ground;
the magic of watersong lilting, the soft leaves giving
cushion to my buoyant spirit floating and leaving,
away, away I soared beyond the cares of this concrete world;
my banner whipping and flipping to peace;
I, at last, eyes closed, unfurled.
Copyright ©
Invierno
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2014-10-31 08:12:18]
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Re: Glade In The Woods Out Of Time
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 31st October 2014 @ 09:13:40 AM AEST
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Wow, this is absolute magic you have created. The words you laced together to create such abundant imagery- spectacular!
Loving this post quite a bit. Keep 'Em coming.
~Scorp |
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Re: Glade In The Woods Out Of Time
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 31st October 2014 @ 06:14:20 PM AEST
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| i'm with scorp; keep 'em coming:: this is outstandingly beautiful, the flow, style and images gently tangible, one of my new favorites of yours, |
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Re: Glade In The Woods Out Of Time
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 31st October 2014 @ 11:42:39 PM AEST
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Agree with Scorp...
Every freakin time...every time.
where stillness is so still deafness might have forgot itself
and dappled light invents new delights to play
and frolic as fairy nymphs might on any given day;
These three lines is where I first lost it. and then I couldnt keep my euphoria from rupturing after that. I have read over 3 times in the comments section. Dont leave us though, you need to stay with me and scorp and invierno |
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Re: Glade In The Woods Out Of Time
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 31st October 2014 @ 11:42:42 PM AEST
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Agree with Scorp...
Every freakin time...every time.
where stillness is so still deafness might have forgot itself
and dappled light invents new delights to play
and frolic as fairy nymphs might on any given day;
These three lines is where I first lost it. and then I couldnt keep my euphoria from rupturing after that. I have read over 3 times in the comments section. Dont leave us though, you need to stay with me and scorp and invierno |
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Re: Glade In The Woods Out Of Time
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 1st November 2014 @ 07:56:00 AM AEST
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Hey there boet
Well yet another beautiful piece. Yes if we close our eyes merge with nature the results are mind blowing. Great job in showing us just that. The style and flow well flawless as well boet. God bless
Greetings
Gert |
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