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Flattery-Fidelity Border
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
on
Thursday, 30th October 2014 @ 05:52:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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A compliment so pleasantly projected
Grateful and elated am I to be the recipient thereof
Confidence succeeds and a cheerful mood lights my way
Still the flatter-fidelity border I shall not cross
For vain would be emotional compromise for love's loss
Feedback so positive causes my heart to leap
The swing in my step accentuated
Excitement for this daily process can't be hidden
Yet I must divert my attention to the task at hand
Since evening the playing field is forbidden
My countenance you it pleases
And the inner lady applauds your recognition
She should ensure that words will not create a bond
A pseudo-significant attachment encouraged among the rest
Of your female picks, since my mate
He swears that his eyes only dwell on the best
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Deidra_Carmichael
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2014-10-30 17:52:25]
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Re: Flattery-Fidelity Border
(User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on
Saturday, 1st November 2014 @ 08:55:10 PM AEST
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Your countenance is wonderful to me. I don't know you or know what you look like, but I have a picture in my mind, and it's a nice one.
Thank you, Diedra.
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Re: Flattery-Fidelity Border
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 8th November 2014 @ 06:28:33 AM AEST
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I was about to log off here but thought I'd read this just before I did.
I'm glad I took that decision.
Beauitfully crafted !!
Steve |
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