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Halloween
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
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Tuesday, 28th October 2014 @ 05:54:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Halloween
The wind blows with an eerie howl
The darkness is as black as a Vampires cowl
The witching hour is nigh
Be careful and try not to die
Lightning bolts light up the sky of castle Dracula on mountain high
The graveyard Zombies stare
I'm not chancing walking through there
Things move without assistance
Poltergeist reveal their existence
Venkman is slimed, yet again
That ugly green Ghost is such a pain
Lock your doors and close the drapes
People are shouting “The Wolfman has escaped”
All get into bed and under the covers
“I see dead people” whispers my little brother
by banjosandWitch 28/10/14
https://soundcloud.com/gary-banjosandwitch-worthington/evilseed
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Re: Halloween
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by softerware on
Wednesday, 29th October 2014 @ 08:08:29 PM AEST
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I especially love the ending! Just when i think I am safely in bed…wham! "I see dead people"--you had me jumping out of my skin!--Man is the only animal that likes to scare himself…That being said, I liked!
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Re: Halloween
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 30th October 2014 @ 12:49:58 PM AEST
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Ooooh, I can't wait until tomorrow! :) You captured the spooky and mischievous nature of Halloween. The ending made me laugh.
Trick or Treat!
~Scorp ^_^
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Re: Halloween
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 8th November 2014 @ 06:21:06 AM AEST
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Im in the house alone and I can hear the clock ticking now. Never thought about it all that much before I read this.
Is it cold now or is that a chill running down my spine?
On the bright side I'm not Ebeneezer Scrooge so hopefully I won't be visited by 3 ghosts tonight.
Nice write
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