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Happily Ever After
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Friday, 24th October 2014 @ 01:12:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I never meant to hurt you
You-The taming of the shrew.
Shrewdly dissecting my life
Life. It cuts deep like a knife
Knives that separate flesh from bone
Bonehead move; I'm accident prone
Prone to attack and to reject-
Reject the jester then direct
Direct the king to glance my way
Wayward behaviours made him stray
Strayed emotions not laid to rest-
Resting peacefully on your chest
Chest of troves the words you spoke
Spoken with words to evoke
Evoke a pang in my heart
Heart exploding from your dart
Darting from your dogged attempt
Attempts to hold me in contempt
Contemptuous verbs misdirect
Misdirecting this reconnect
Reconnect your heart to mine
Mine is yours, it's on the line
Lines were drawn in bardic tongue
Tongues suppressed below your rung
Wrung your bell, though frail from fight
Fighting darkness from the light
Light the way, please let me in
Inside your heart- where I've been.
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hauntedscorp
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2014-10-24 13:12:55]
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Re: Happily Ever After
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th October 2014 @ 01:43:20 PM AEST
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This is part of the reasons why I have dubbed thee Scorperrific & Scorpendous!!! I love what you did there with the words ending and beginning lines. Lines that are really cool. Cool that this poem is with greatness. Great be the Scorpendous One!
Love certainly can be a pain in the ol' ass! Hearts do disconnect and unfortunately, sometimes. the connection is never made again or is never the same. :( I could feel the emotion.
Thank you for an enjoyable yet painful read. Definitely poetry in action. |
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Re: Happily Ever After
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by ebooibo on
Friday, 24th October 2014 @ 06:09:43 PM AEST
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| Nice |
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Re: Happily Ever After
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 24th October 2014 @ 11:20:02 PM AEST
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| This is what I meant by epic...my God this is simply amazing. your word play in this one is fantastic. I am quickly becoming a fanatic of yours. as others should be too. Your talents are obvious and I am glad to see you writing. |
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Re: Happily Ever After
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 24th October 2014 @ 11:21:10 PM AEST
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| Had to read it again.... |
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Re: Happily Ever After
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by Tiny_Tina on
Sunday, 26th October 2014 @ 12:51:30 AM AEST
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This is very impressive!!!
TT |
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Re: Happily Ever After
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by olestoryteller on
Sunday, 26th October 2014 @ 11:34:35 AM AEST
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| So very well written. Awesome to read............Michael:-] |
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Re: Happily Ever After
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 29th October 2014 @ 09:53:41 AM AEST
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| I like the way one word leads to another in your poem. When you publish your book let me know, you are a very talented poet. |
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Re: Happily Ever After
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 31st October 2014 @ 03:07:15 PM AEST
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strong, raw, powerfully emotionally penned, makes one breathless reading it!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Happily Ever After
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by sanders on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 02:16:11 PM AEST
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| Like I say...You are amazing and your poetry is just awesome...such a brilliant write...leaves me spell-bound... |
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