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And I wanted to ask you...
Contributed by
flex4life13
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Thursday, 23rd October 2014 @ 06:25:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Gaze into the light, propagating tinctures, unfamiliar dimensions
A discalced heroin, she resides within you, she of paramount tenor.
Shamelessly enter into the bright, bright epochs in celebrations
as a merciless newcomer, she who conjugates in a feisty fervor.
coming home to a land under a thousand stars,
fleeing the unknown, that of which failed to claim your flighty heart.
Need they remind you, need they unyieldingly bend out of sorts?
Trust in everything but us two, make sense, you cannot of this short.
For I see in you an ocean of surprises, of that needn’t I remind you,
romp like this, a figurine full of spite, for that always Ill despise you.
Barefooted wench, easy enough to see even once you pushed me in the dark.
An earful conveyed, yet still I taste the sweetest layer of bark.
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2014-10-23 18:25:13]
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Re: And I wanted to ask you...
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 24th October 2014 @ 04:19:04 AM AEST
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Oh man this is an exciting poem. there is a lot of tension here. this poem is just waiting to break open or apart. this is a great expression of what you are feeling...
For I see in you an ocean of surprises, of that needn’t I remind you,
romp like this, a figurine full of spite, for that always Ill despise you. |
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Re: And I wanted to ask you...
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by ebooibo on
Friday, 24th October 2014 @ 06:11:15 PM AEST
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| Sweet |
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Re: And I wanted to ask you...
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 31st October 2014 @ 04:14:18 PM AEST
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deep, moving and beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
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