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Hello
Contributed by
Red_Silo
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Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 07:34:59 PM in AEST
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Hello
Hello is one of the most important words there is, and it's taken for granted every day.
What would happen to you if everyone you loved were taken from you?
Then what would you say?
It's such an ordinary thing, but only to the blind.
Slowly we all slip away so live this togetherness fully until it's your time.
In case you failed to notice, in case you failed to see...
I just want you cherish the ones you love...the same way you cherished me.
Life is a test, I'm sure you see.
Sure sometimes you'll be sad, but remember I miss you oh so bad.
I'll meet you by the gate, just belive in God...he loves you...so much...I just wanted to say hello.
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Re: Hello
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by ginsdance on
Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 07:45:05 PM AEST
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Oh this is beautiful. It reminds me of my family up in heaven waiting for me. You can always think of things that you never said when someone leaves this earth... but you can never find the way to express them while they are still here. Hello just about sums it up! Great write!
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Re: Hello
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by lil_hummingbird on
Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 09:06:08 AM AEST
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| You are oh so right about the word Hello. If more people took the time to say hello this world would be a better place. great write |
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