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Swallowed Pride
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
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Monday, 20th October 2014 @ 04:28:19 PM in AEST
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Passionate honesty has built this layer of mistrust. I can put no more faith in us. I accept your past life and embrace you completely, if I must. My stomach still turns. My heart burns . My fists curl . Clenched tightly in a fiery ball. Looking to put a hole through this cement wall. Hoping for blood. Praying for love. I see now, none will be found , where it was disallowed. Not with any amount , of convincing , we are revisiting , wasting time , unforgiving . I left you too many times before . Now wishing , for a moment of forgiveness . Open this door . Let me in so that I can exist no more .
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Re: Swallowed Pride
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by dvtpdw on
Monday, 20th October 2014 @ 08:10:32 PM AEST
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| In past anguish, in present hope and tomorrows gone before they come - I see so much within your words and they send one on a path of dismay. So intense, impassion and strong - great write, P |
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Re: Swallowed Pride
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st October 2014 @ 07:36:35 PM AEST
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| Nicely done. Reminds me of a Hemingway quote about writing: he said something like ' it's easy to write, all you do is sit at the typewriter and bleed'. I definite can relate to this, I feke you were writing about my grievances. |
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Re: Swallowed Pride
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 25th October 2014 @ 04:17:50 PM AEST
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Love this. Written with precision and I love your voice here. The staccato way you wrote this is just perfect.
~Scorp |
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