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Why the Frown?
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Monday, 20th October 2014 @ 01:05:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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An orgasm abducted
My body lay corrupted
Stimulations erupted
Once flaccid, now erected
Urgent need is connected
Deliciously assaulted
Two bodies now collided
Master foreplay applauded
Now you have been evicted.
Peace!
**Author's note: shoutout to ypdc'er Muppetman, whose traditional sign off; 'Peace!' seemed like a befitting end to this tongue-in-cheek poem.
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Re: Why the Frown?
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by Invierno on
Monday, 20th October 2014 @ 02:22:58 PM AEST
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cool stuff. Good job and sparse of words...refreshing. Kudos to MM!
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Re: Why the Frown?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th October 2014 @ 02:41:40 PM AEST
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Love 'em and leave 'em. I want someone I can just make go home every night. Think I'll ever find one? Na, me either.
"No, you can't leave me like this!" said the individual this was directed at!
Nice not so nice. I love the Scorperrific poems!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Why the Frown?
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by softerware on
Monday, 20th October 2014 @ 10:33:23 PM AEST
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Tongue in cheek indeed Scorp! A "just the facts m'am" Dragnet approach?
My girlfriend's mantra comes to mind..
"I want a man in my life; not in my house!"
Sex is like a meal…all preparation, and setting the table..and over in a flash, with a bit of a mess left over! Ha. Ha.
Well done! (or was it medium rare?)
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Re: Why the Frown?
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by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2014 @ 03:00:45 AM AEST
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Not my style as a man. None the less well written and F...... Hilarious whahahahahahahahahahaha
Greetings
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Re: Why the Frown?
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by Spike on
Thursday, 23rd October 2014 @ 05:11:35 AM AEST
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...and sentences, contracted!
if only no fuss meant no muss. Just spitballing, but the last stanza could have described the cosmological tilting of the proto-earth and the formation of the moon.
and 'did the earth move for you?' shows all far-fetched references are relevant to this enjoyable, utilitarian concoction. Thanks, Scorp!
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Re: Why the Frown?
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 5th November 2014 @ 12:09:36 PM AEST
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your mind is priceless as is this poem!
hugs n' love nessa |
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