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Misguided
Contributed by
flex4life13
on
Sunday, 19th October 2014 @ 06:52:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Drawstrings pulled too tight, familial horizons looming.
Evermore in sight, carnal awakenings, I too am swooning.
Safe-kept in an ever frozen moment, color, rapture in your eyes.
Fading out twinkles of torment, amour, hardly fortified.
May the wrong fit the right, undesignated keys, irate locks.
eloquently, shining oh so bright, part the seas, steady the docks.
Ashore, a guiding beam, cryptically shedding its rind.
I implore, faintly screams, the interweaving of my mind.
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2014-10-19 18:52:09]
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Re: Misguided
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by softerware on
Sunday, 19th October 2014 @ 09:27:48 PM AEST
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This dances all over my thoughts. I sense a thread, but it continues to elude my grasp. "a guiding beam, cryptically shedding its rind" reveals the dance within the mind, and it all comes together.
If we could see our random thoughts, this is surely what they might be if captured in words!
"Safe-kept in an ever frozen moment"!
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Re: Misguided
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 20th October 2014 @ 12:06:18 AM AEST
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beautiful and intricate,
hugs n' love nessa |
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