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Happy Feet
Contributed by
Invierno
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Wednesday, 15th October 2014 @ 05:36:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Slip and slap go happy feet-
toes find and squish the earthy peat,
'neath heel, sole and soul as well-
this simple joy unfolds and spells
the essence of our Mother Earth;
so simple, swell to reconnect,
to tap the space 'tween birth and death.
Copyright ©
Invierno
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2014-10-15 17:36:38]
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Re: Happy Feet
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 15th October 2014 @ 05:48:50 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Happy Feet
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by softerware on
Wednesday, 15th October 2014 @ 09:28:10 PM AEST
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So well described that I could smell the mud and sweetness of the earth. Your closing line is classic Invierno--leaving us with a profound moment to consider!
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Re: Happy Feet
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by RussellReinhardt on
Thursday, 16th October 2014 @ 02:36:49 AM AEST
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Hello Mike
As I saw the title I saw penguins dancing LoL no wander they waddle along heads still they enjoy the feel of mother earth. More than just a penguin poem. Life lesson is here appreciate what God has given us. Great write my brother. God bless
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Re: Happy Feet
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 16th October 2014 @ 01:28:39 PM AEST
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Really beautiful :)
Rain and natures beauty all around can set the poetic mind ablaze. Great visuals, flows nicely, and no wasted words.
Great job.
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Re: Happy Feet
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 19th October 2014 @ 07:58:06 PM AEST
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beautiful...
hugs n' love nessa |
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