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Siemper Fidolis
Contributed by
softerware
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Saturday, 11th October 2014 @ 02:17:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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I still melt when he looks at me;
with sleepy longing eyes;
His chin and brows are getting grey;
He’s slower now to rise.
He sees through gauzy curtains;
His hair’s in tangly knots;
His stride is not as certain;
His belly not as taut.
I feel him twitch when deep in sleep;
And more and more, he snores!
I wake beside him glad to keep;
His company once more.
We’ve been each others 13 years;
Of fun and fights and cuddles
We’ve known our share of love and tears
And troubles we’ve unmuddled.
We built our casa bella;
On trust, respect, and kisses;
He’s still my steady fella;
And I’m his favorite Mrs.
We’ve vowed until our dying days
That we will not be parted;
I, the lady fair will play;
To this lion-hearted!
Each day he will defend me;
And I shall swoon and praise.
Fiercely we’ll pretend that he;
Owns all that he surveys!
His secret’s safe; we’ll play our parts;
To love this rabble rouser!
For who could find it their heart;
To tell him he's a Schnauzer?
Copyright ©
softerware
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2014-10-11 02:17:24]
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Re: Siemper Fidolis
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th October 2014 @ 02:56:43 AM AEST
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| I had no idea where this was going. well played, my friend, well played! |
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Re: Siemper Fidolis
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 11th October 2014 @ 10:43:53 AM AEST
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Well now. I was enjoying this beautiful write the whole way through, but you really stepped it up at the end. Terrific surprise finish! I love Schnauzers (what size?) Salt & Pepper, or black? Ooh, I'm curious ;) Dogs are one of the best creatures, if you ask me. It sounds like this guy or girl is truly loved and part of your family.
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Re: Siemper Fidolis
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 11th October 2014 @ 12:59:31 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful and adorable!!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Siemper Fidolis
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 15th October 2014 @ 06:26:16 AM AEST
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Nicely done. Great pet poem.
Invierno |
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Re: Siemper Fidolis
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 15th October 2014 @ 10:06:55 PM AEST
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Oh this is beautiful and the end just melted my heart!Well written and smile filled.Thanks for sharing!
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