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You Are The Devil
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Thursday, 9th October 2014 @ 09:23:10 PM in AEST
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I am on the rebound
No longer tightly wound
Past failures set aside
Taking it all in stride
Words full of mockery
Drunken debauchery
I love you's are crackly
Excuses are daftly
Here is my warning growl
Stealthily on the prowl
For a morsel to chew
And I'm coming for you.
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hauntedscorp
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2014-10-09 21:23:10]
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Re: You Are The Devil
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 10th October 2014 @ 02:00:15 AM AEST
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ha! absolutely love it! perfectly beautiful sarcasm at its finest!
the growl made me laugh and the search for your 'morsel' had
me roaring, ...reading through a few more times i see a more
serious tone and look out to whomever be the snack! ~just
goes to show all that fine scorpio creative talent no matter the
mood:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: You Are The Devil
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 10th October 2014 @ 05:39:07 AM AEST
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Hi there
I agree with Nessa however I'm gonna call it as I see it "*****y" LoL good write
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: You Are The Devil
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th October 2014 @ 12:12:30 AM AEST
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Where's the damn EEK emoticon when ya' need it!?!?
Go get 'em Scorpendous!!! I be lovin this poem!!!
Oh, and I disagree with the author's note. This is very special, especially for the fact that it has the specialness of Scorpness writin' all over it!!! |
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Re: You Are The Devil
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 15th October 2014 @ 06:31:13 AM AEST
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good job here! Reminds me of one I wrote years ago . all I remember is the opening lines,;
"Welcome to the darker side of me, careful not to trip, I'll tangle you in fear...welcome to my darker side...aren't you glad you're here?"
Same theme and it was always a poem I wanted to rework to the subtle intent I had envisioned.
No need to do that now, as this poem does it handily, and better, then my attempt of long ago.
Great job,
Invierno |
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