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Is It Infinite
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Thursday, 2nd October 2014 @ 10:20:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The house is cold.
Your whispers echo off these shattered walls.
Drunken truths still fill the air.
Conversations pointing fingers.
Air is thick as the TV flickers to kill the pin drop.
Alone pondering on how much space one needs.
Is it infinite?
What I thought forever was is not infinite to me.
It holds confusion.
Space is more gentle on the heart than love.
It cares not for hurt feelings, lies devised for the victim role.
Only light and dark matter.
Chaos brings these two together.
Same story as our own.
Unique as each star.
Copyright ©
lostrelic
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2014-10-02 22:20:21]
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Re: Is It Infinite
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by Invierno on
Friday, 3rd October 2014 @ 12:37:46 PM AEST
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A thought provoking piece of writing. I'll go over it a few times. Nicely done.
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Re: Is It Infinite
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 3rd October 2014 @ 03:14:09 PM AEST
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Can't fault a poem that flows so effortlessly, yet is packed full of emotion in its lines.
Inspiring write to me and I hope many others.
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Re: Is It Infinite
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 4th October 2014 @ 12:17:56 AM AEST
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Great feeling in this, your words really resonated here. I can sense the agony in the stand-alone line that bears the title. Also, those last three lines. Good stuff.
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