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A Memory
Contributed by
sanders
on
Wednesday, 1st October 2014 @ 05:39:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Far away in a lonely world
Where there's no one to hear my solitary weep
No one to caress me in warmth of need
I wander in search of someone to get freed.
Far away in a distant desert
Where its always dry and sultry weather
I wander in search of a little water
Someone so kind to grant me peace in leisure.
Far away behind the future
There was something I cannot remember
Something to pull me in times of distress together
Someone to cherish my memories and drive away my fear.
Far away somewhere in a corner of my soul
There's still a place so hard and cold
That craves for some belongingness untold
Yet something that still reminds me that I am not Alone.
Copyright ©
sanders
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2014-10-01 05:39:02]
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Re: A Memory
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 1st October 2014 @ 11:17:35 AM AEST
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best line ever:: Far away behind the future this could be a whole poem in itself, excellent writing, beautiful concepts....
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: A Memory
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 03:33:59 PM AEST
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Intriguing words. I like how you flipped the tables halfway through, yet still warned off others near the end. Only to dangle a carrot of hope to wrap it up. Nicely done!
~Scorp |
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Re: A Memory
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th December 2014 @ 05:35:34 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful! |
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