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Poetic Release
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dvtpdw
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Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 07:15:48 PM in AEST
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My poetic writings are an emotional outlet
A way to understand, remember, forget
Moments created around life's abject terror
Poems help me build a protective barrier
Painting memories within a circle of words
Clarifies each as to being actual or absurd
Poems enable me to take a mental step back
As I pile each upon their life's spirited stack
One can write of sunshine and butterflies
Ignoring truths that exist in front of our eyes
To me life's but a part of an ongoing dream
Even as it blends into tomorrows yet unseen
To tell one's tale in stanzas for all to read
Takes a soul's bravery of heart to succeed
It's more than a picturesque way to explore
Adventures fanning wind for the words to soar
Each poem rides freedom upon passionate wings
Even as it contains stories of conflicting things
In each word lies the beating of a weary heart
Poetry's my release of pain some memories start
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Re: Poetic Release
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 07:59:12 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful! a true joy to read:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Poetic Release
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by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2014 @ 03:56:52 AM AEST
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Hi there
Very Very well put penned perfectly. Poetry is to each what he wants it to be a tool if well used brings therapy. Great write God bless
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: Poetic Release
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by sanders on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2014 @ 01:27:54 PM AEST
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| U r absolutely right...."One can write of......ignoring truths.....in front of our eyes".....beautiful line...that's the magic of poetry |
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Re: Poetic Release
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th September 2014 @ 08:49:24 PM AEST
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endearingly bits frail as
topics like why
mark some imaginary
justification
in some clouded
minds
poetic release
is a beautiful reason
got out of shell
for a time
Bukowski wrote down
the exact time in the morning
when he wrote
a city is a poem
maybe like you
answering just why
freedom is the minds
quotient of
the habit forming
or non-habit forming
ability to seek release
or paint contradictions
or soothe emotional
states of being
Simple is best
when it is in its
truest form
waiting in line
feeling blue
then sweet
release
coffee in hand
ten ounce cup
for me to drink
I say thank you
- for the poem
Peace!
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Re: Poetic Release
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by speedy on
Tuesday, 30th September 2014 @ 08:44:39 PM AEST
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My sentiments exactly!
That's why I write poetry - I love to write, but it's also an emotional release. It's relief.
Great write!
Hannah B |
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Re: Poetic Release
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 3rd October 2014 @ 03:48:35 PM AEST
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Having an outlet for the stresses and strains is a healthy thing in my opinion.
Poetry can purge the mind of pent up frustration, it can tell of joy, sadness, fear and all manner of emotions.
Maybe doctors should prescribe it instead of pills?
Steve |
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Re: Poetic Release
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 4th December 2014 @ 03:43:57 PM AEST
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Nailed it. Awesome job, and so true. Some great lines in here, with rhyme and flow to match.
~Scorp |
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