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unspoken words
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 01:45:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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lost in that place of memory in my heart the void
that holds only emptiness and unsung songs of life
dreams left on the windowsill of time- nothingness
gone, never tangible though for a fleeting moment
once upon a time happiness was a nirvana, a truth
now it is but a fragment of longing...
now untouchable love, the beauty, the heart smiles
destroyed in the wind like ashes from blazing fire
taken by life's hand in a split second of the fates
photographs still exist true it was once real enough
the sun shines through the trees from the heavens-
above the clouds- his soul, smile, love...
my heart holds onto these memories and i breathe
in and out/day and night- as we ride around the sun
it can warm the skin though not the hurtful place
only the hug that will never again come could ever
do that- break the ice crystals and melt the pain
but i would do it all again...
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ladyfawn
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Re: unspoken words
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by sanders on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 02:03:20 PM AEST
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| what a marvellous write.... |
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Re: unspoken words
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by RussellReinhardt on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 02:06:55 PM AEST
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Hi Nessa
What a beautiful poem. Holds happy and sad, hope and love. Yesterday today and tomorrow in it. Love is a beautiful emotion. God bless
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: unspoken words
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 10:48:27 PM AEST
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Wow, this is a metaphor avalanche! Memories truly make for great poetry and here, your honor, I give you exhibit unspoken words by the Great Nessa for my proof of that!
Amazing!
Tim |
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Re: unspoken words
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 25th September 2014 @ 08:31:44 AM AEST
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Nessa,
I came back to this site feeling like a stranger but when I saw your comment I felt the warmth of familiarity. :) Thank you for always being so kind with your feedback.
Lovely write, all the sentiments that I myself am going through. So honest and beautiful.
Till then my dear, keep well.
Hanna |
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Re: unspoken words
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by softerware on
Friday, 26th September 2014 @ 11:33:21 PM AEST
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Such a lovely reminder of the bittersweet and cherished memories "dreams left on the windowsill of time" that pierce our present and color the shadows. What a powerful expression of your longing is written in these musical words. You have dug deep into my memories and evoked a sweet melancholy worth re-visiting at your beckoning!
This was a joy to savor.
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Re: unspoken words
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 30th September 2014 @ 02:51:32 PM AEST
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This is beyond lovely. Written with the finesse of a poet, and woven from the pain of eternal love. I was deeply moved while reading this. Great stuff.
~Scorp |
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Re: unspoken words
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 3rd October 2014 @ 03:19:33 PM AEST
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Love how this poem tugs at the emotions and then refuses to let go.
Beautifully woven from start to finish
Really enjoyed reading yet again.
Steve |
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Re: unspoken words
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by Tunesmith on
Saturday, 4th October 2014 @ 11:24:57 AM AEST
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| Beautiful Flow Glad to see such talented work. |
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Re: unspoken words
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by Flex4life13 on
Thursday, 23rd October 2014 @ 06:32:34 PM AEST
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| I often do not comment, but I must say I truly love this! I too, lament and lament of a moment passed. How do we ever snap out of this? |
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Re: unspoken words
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 1st November 2014 @ 07:53:07 PM AEST
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dreams left on the windowsill of time- nothingness
This line really hit me. I tend to be very introspective and this really made me think. love to see all your writings. this was very well thought out. |
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Re: unspoken words
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd November 2014 @ 02:10:31 PM AEST
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Longing so beautifully delivered to the page. Memories are a knife cloaked in velvet: smooth to the touch but they can also hurt so badly. Tangible to the mind, yet untouchable. Your feeling of loss is so utterly strong here. That desire to feel the physical memories in the memory, is one all will relate to in some way.
A memorable poem. |
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Re: unspoken words
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 5th November 2014 @ 11:44:45 AM AEST
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Oh Ness.... I read the first stanza and couldn't go on... I am still trying to come to terms with the death of my nephew in New York and even though it will be 1 month tomorrow, it is still as fresh as the day it happened... Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece...
Hugs and Woofies,
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Re: unspoken words
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by weemick on
Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 08:54:44 PM AEST
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| Hi Nessa, this one stirs the heart with It's echoes of sad memories. I, like many really, can relate to this piece. I know the memories can come back so strong, they are always there, In the chambers of the mind, just waiting to come out.You put across your feelings so gently. Memories are always there, some haunting us, spectres of the past, the thing Is, for some these memories may be all they have. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE. |
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by Blackheart on
Monday, 8th December 2014 @ 06:11:52 PM AEST
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This poem to me was written as if you are sighing...as if you know you need to let something go, but also know you will miss it greatly. You beautifully sculpt that message into a fine statue of poetry. You never fail to please the heart & soul.
All love
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