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Interval; while my hearts not beating
Contributed by
Cathartic
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Saturday, 20th September 2014 @ 08:33:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I love you. Unto the deep crevasses of my mind. I love you. Even into the dark alleys that bind my thoughts to cement walls. I love you. With a child-like tempo, your fingertips dance along the interim of my heart. My body attempts to keep the beat. I love you. Wholesomely, recklessly, tragically, indefinitely. The measure of my unending love to you, folds it's arms around the universe and will not let go.
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Re: Interval; while my hearts not beating
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 08:43:31 AM AEST
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i think you could do a lot more with the
layout, but it is absolutely beautiful:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Interval; while my hearts not beating
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by Apollonia on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 01:10:04 PM AEST
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| That's beautiful wish someone would do the same for me... |
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Re: Interval; while my hearts not beating
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th September 2014 @ 03:44:13 PM AEST
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| It's bively written. And for me poems were made for men to profess their love when they exhausted all conventional means of expressing it. Well done. But change the format to dictate the rhythm of the poem. |
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