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Hey Mom....
Contributed by
RussellReinhardt
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Saturday, 20th September 2014 @ 04:18:26 PM in AEST
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19:09:2014....
Watching my mother doing washing.
Next the floors they need mopping.
As a boy of only ten.
I was taken back again and again.
This here must be the most beautiful lady.
I was convinced that was no maybe.
She laboured day after day.
Always had a kind word to say.
What mother did for us was done with love.
She had plenty, more than enough.
I thought to myself mom had all the right stuff.
I stood there and said hey mom.
One day I want a wife like you mom.
She looked at me with tears in her eyes.
Then she said wouldn't that be first prize.
But why would you want a woman like me.
Well mom everything I see.
You love my dad.
Yes I know sometimes he makes you mad.
When ever I'm down and heartbroken.
All I need to hear is your voice the word spoken.
Well I want a wife like you.
One day that can love me too.
RR
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Re: Hey Mom....
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by dvtpdw on
Saturday, 20th September 2014 @ 11:18:08 PM AEST
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| What a sweet, touching melody to your mom. It made my breath catch because it is what all mom's hope for. You paint a vibrant picture of a loving, caring woman who was also your mom. Very very nice write, P |
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Re: Hey Mom....
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by sanders on
Sunday, 21st September 2014 @ 12:48:01 AM AEST
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| This is really nice Rus...Moms r the most precious one in our life....& u expressed that totally |
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Re: Hey Mom....
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by Invierno on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 07:40:06 AM AEST
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perfect, Gert. Your sincerity is a beacon of refreshing emotion.
Invierno |
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Re: Hey Mom....
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 08:41:30 AM AEST
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very sweet... a beautifully penned piece...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Hey Mom....
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 09:33:42 AM AEST
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Beautiful ! I feel the same about my mom. People make fun of me because she does all for me .. But no one will ever compare .
Love this , great job. |
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Re: Hey Mom....
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by speedy on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2014 @ 04:40:19 PM AEST
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This describes how I feel about my mom. She's done so much for me - & my sister & brother.
Absolutely beautiful!
Hannah B |
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Re: Hey Mom....
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by softerware on
Friday, 26th September 2014 @ 11:40:08 PM AEST
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Stunning. Speaking as a mom myself, who could wish for more? Speaking as a daughter, I wish I had said it so well.
I envy the richness of your life, bestowed on you by a woman who loved you so, that you are able to give words to feelings for those of us who would, but cannot.
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