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Torrent of Water and Life
Contributed by
invierno
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Tuesday, 16th September 2014 @ 12:34:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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How long can the water flow,
turning hewn rough to smooth-
With rocks, how long, nobody knows,
just that the water soothes.
How still can we remain,
life's water rushing succubus;
how long until smoothness fades,
as life has its way with us?
As long as we stand for it,
these lives, deaths and losses build;
until the torrent chips us bit by bit,
our smoothness hewn to rougher build.
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invierno
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2014-09-16 12:34:38]
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Re: Torrent of Water and Life
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 17th September 2014 @ 01:58:04 AM AEST
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Nicely done and I love the use of rocks and water here, very good write
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Re: Torrent of Water and Life
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 07:40:55 AM AEST
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this is beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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