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Dead Lovers
Contributed by
Opium
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Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As we step in the grave, straight to infinity
Love we shall forever save, together you and me
So here we lay, in our quiet reverie
With no words to say, just an image of your eternal beauty
So scribe us deep, into the earth
Seal us safe in our love rebirth
Carve us deeper into the soil
Seal us safer in our holy coil
No son of man, can ever do you harm
In this joyful tan, I enjoy your charm
And here we lay, like new born flowers
With no price to pay, but being two dead lovers
Scribe us deep, into the ground
Drag us downward to never be found
Sunk us deeper, into the loam
Carve us deeper keep us in this sacred home
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2003-05-21 23:05:00]
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Re: Dead Lovers
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 01:13:15 AM AEST
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| very enjoyable and interesting write, love the images:) ~hugs nessa |
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Re: Dead Lovers
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 09:08:39 PM AEST
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Awesome liked this one, but then death always interested me. And you have put it into words that bring forth such vivd images.
Look forward to more of your work. |
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Re: Dead Lovers
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by gina on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 10:32:08 AM AEST
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mmmm y do u always figure urself dead with soemone ,or ur lover is dead , ya3neh u know that ma 7a ysorlak 7ada w enta 3ayish :P lol good poem :) but u know i dont like those sad ones (eh mbala)
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Re: Dead Lovers
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 09:04:18 AM AEST
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| You have described shared death so beautifully..Its almost romantic lol..Excellent!! |
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