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In my Head
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Thursday, 11th September 2014 @ 03:37:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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A simple thought, a single tear, memories of love lost as I look in the mirror,
Words escape, thoughts unclear, a broken heart I fear won't heal,
When you left, my world fell apart, I see the end, but when did it start,
Blinded by love, I would never have guess the outcome,
I gave you my heart, it was a gift you ripped apart,
Laughed in my face, now my chest is home to an empty space,
I close my eyes and pray it's a dream, only to realize, it's the real thing,
A nightmare if you will, losing you is like a jagged pill,
Unable to swallow, pride is gone, will I see tomorrow,
Thoughts of suicide as my world crumbles, try and stand but only stumble,
A soul shattered, this is what remains of a man beaten and battered,
The lights grow dim, I will soon face my end,
Voices in my head, "Stay with me my friend,"
"Call 911, I think he's done,"
Wake up in bed, it was all in my head.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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2014-09-11 03:37:20]
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Re: In my Head
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 13th September 2014 @ 07:45:18 PM AEST
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| I really loved the way this poem flowed. you are very talented. |
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Re: In my Head
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by emystar on
Saturday, 13th September 2014 @ 08:11:59 PM AEST
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U almost had me crying friend, then I Read the end.
I knew that this poem wasn't like u.
Thank God it was only in your head.
Big huggs, blessings to u and yours,
emy
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Re: In my Head
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 06:56:41 AM AEST
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dearest matt, i'm always here if you need to chat, this
is heart wrenching, tho beautifully penned, i will pray
for happiness and rainbows for you...
hugs n' love nessa |
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