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~Night Shine~
Contributed by
shelby
on
Monday, 8th September 2014 @ 12:45:59 AM in AEST
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The moon wont be full
for another two nights
could have fooled me.
As it is shining from
behind the lofty pine tree's
casting on the city
a soft white sheen
even seems the shadows
tonight,are glistening.
It seems to be moving
fast across the sky
lighting up reflections
in the pools of my brown eyes
it wont be full
for another two nights
but you could have fooled me.
The city is still,well somewhat tonight.
The air still warm,
wet down with humid.
The darkness is romantic to me
lost in the night,
and night shine.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2014-09-08 00:45:59]
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Re: ~Night Shine~
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 8th September 2014 @ 12:15:34 PM AEST
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| Beautifully serene...... |
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Re: ~Night Shine~
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by sanders on
Wednesday, 10th September 2014 @ 05:40:40 PM AEST
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nice write...specially the "night shine"
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Re: ~Night Shine~
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 11th September 2014 @ 02:53:33 AM AEST
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I enjoyed the read, it's like I was there, well done my friend.
Phantom |
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Re: ~Night Shine~
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 06:52:41 AM AEST
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absolutely beautifully penned, thank you for the glimpse
into your world:)
woofies, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~Night Shine~
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 3rd October 2014 @ 05:34:55 PM AEST
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There is always magic in the moon.
I've often looked at it, thinking it is so close you could almost touch it, yet knowing it is in reality so far away.
Nice write
Steve |
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