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One Last Shot
Contributed by
mick
on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2014 @ 03:31:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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They were never ment to be lovers,
but one could never stop loving
the other. They saw thier love's destruction
and alway's tried to deny thier love.
I guess you're the only one that had
success, you were always the first to it.
The first to love,
the first to stop,
even to the grave.
Yet I still feel your presance here,
always taking me to where we met.
When I flick through our conversations
I still look for your hidden message,
always in plain veiw but always in the shadows,
in the middle of the road yet always round the corner.
P.S. I've never stopped loving you
Copyright ©
mick
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2014-09-02 15:31:43]
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Re: One Last Shot
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by Invierno on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2014 @ 04:40:25 PM AEST
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"even to the grave." VERY powerful
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Re: One Last Shot
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2014 @ 02:42:18 AM AEST
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A deep piece, I enjoyed the read
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Re: One Last Shot
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 5th September 2014 @ 03:57:32 AM AEST
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Hi Mick
Haven't read something from you in a while. Not that you haven't posted. Yes this is a very powerful piece. To still love after someone has left in any form or fashion I think is us humans down fall because we can't move on. Again great write. Blessing
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Re: One Last Shot
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by Invierno on
Friday, 5th September 2014 @ 06:59:04 AM AEST
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read again Mick. this is truly a gifted poem.
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