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This is the way it's to be....
Contributed by
jaima
on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Will you breathe for me,
Once I give up living?
Will you keep caring,
Long after my heart turns black?
Will you keep me alive,
When all I want to do is die?
Will you still worry,
When I stop caring altogether?
Will you still be happy,
When my happiness is gone?
And will you still love,
When all i can do is hate?
But what I really want to know is,
Will you be there for me,
Even though I won't be there for you?
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jaima
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2003-05-21 19:35:00]
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Re: This is the way it's to be....
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by norm on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 03:00:03 PM AEST
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i like your ping pong approach..
i believe i'd sense the negative
quality of another's feelings
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Re: This is the way it's to be....
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by Jaima on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 01:14:03 AM AEST
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| mm...ping pong is an interesting look at my writing style..mm..thanks for the comment |
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