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Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Thursday, 28th August 2014 @ 10:21:21 PM in AEST
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Thoughts
scattering
life splattering
my scarred heart into a mosaic of pieces.
People live life less each day;
desensitized demons or victims of evolution?
Machines think; people forget how to.
Feelings are out-of-style.
Stainless steel hearts replace those made of flesh and blood.
Soon the world will be lost in destiny's flood.
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lesoleilnoire
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2014-08-28 22:21:21]
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Re: Random
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 29th August 2014 @ 05:40:46 PM AEST
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I really like the impact of this, I get what you are saying and agree wholeheartedly.
Evolution yes, but what are we evolving into.
Nice work
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th August 2014 @ 07:10:49 PM AEST
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This made me think of the Terminator movies or the first Robocop movie. Love that.
It is scary and, at times, seems it is headed that way but as long as there are people such as you in the world, it won't be an easy take over. |
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Re: Random
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th August 2014 @ 07:11:11 PM AEST
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| P.S. Love the poem! |
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Re: Random
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by Invierno on
Friday, 29th August 2014 @ 09:22:31 PM AEST
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powerful
Invierno |
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Re: Random
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by houseofleaves on
Sunday, 31st August 2014 @ 01:15:51 AM AEST
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Machines think; people forget how to.
Love this line. Great write friend! |
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