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lady of the silver lake
Contributed by
alicewhite
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Tuesday, 26th August 2014 @ 03:15:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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At waters edge tears reside
honey due moon drip sip upon ripples upon tide
languished lengthening of longing pangs the pride
cold flaming tongues and lips ripped apart
toes test the water to baptise the heart
the two stand together igniting the spark
one upon water the other on land
serpentine forged silver sword
silver trembling hands.
bride and groom
sun and moon
ring of fire
wedding band
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alicewhite
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2014-08-26 03:15:50]
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Re: lady of the silver lake
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by Dorisanne on
Tuesday, 26th August 2014 @ 11:01:25 AM AEST
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| A very nice poem of the event at the lake.Thanks! |
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Re: lady of the silver lake
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by sanders on
Wednesday, 27th August 2014 @ 10:42:30 AM AEST
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| Beautiful write indeed... |
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Re: lady of the silver lake
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 28th August 2014 @ 06:27:06 AM AEST
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I Love these lines. Very well done.
"honey due moon drip sip upon ripples upon tide
languished lengthening of longing pangs the pride"
Invierno |
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Re: lady of the silver lake
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th August 2014 @ 09:30:27 PM AEST
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very beautiful poem! I love it!
I know it's personal, I know of a lake
named Silver Lake.
Peace and calmness it is surrounded by
the stars at night, no roads or houses nearby.
It sings of a beginning perhaps of the two
who pasted by, like it was where they perhaps came together for the first time.
It's a very beautiful poem indeed! I think all beautiful places should have always a Lady's name. Best always AW!
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Re: lady of the silver lake
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by houseofleaves on
Sunday, 31st August 2014 @ 01:21:39 AM AEST
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| Beautiful! |
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Re: lady of the silver lake
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by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 8th September 2014 @ 09:31:30 AM AEST
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I like the last verse, very deep
when I read poems like this, good poems good reads it makes me wish I come here and read more often, Thanks for sharing great write
hope to read more soon
-Voice |
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Re: lady of the silver lake
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 22nd September 2014 @ 05:14:41 AM AEST
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beautiful and exquisite!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: lady of the silver lake
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 3rd October 2014 @ 06:33:32 PM AEST
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Loved the soothing nature of this.
DIdn't need a profileration of wasted words to make a point.
Well done.
Steve |
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Re: lady of the silver lake
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 28th November 2014 @ 03:58:44 PM AEST
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Poetically spirited in every way- stunning attention to language nuances. Happy to venture back to your account page and see poetry of this caliber. Great job!
~Scorp |
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Re: lady of the silver lake
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 6th December 2014 @ 12:41:52 AM AEST
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reminds me of some of the great medieval literature about Arthur and Camelot. well done.
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